Friday, 2 August 2019

Amelia Earhart


She whooshed like a shooting star across the angry sea.
Racing fast like lighting.
The wind blowing like a flag in the dark night.
Big grey clouds like a fluffy sheep.
Sun shining like a glow.
Flying above the tiny city.
Flying across the lumpy clouds.
It was a deadly adventure.
Trying to keep awake for big storms.
Drinking tomato juice all the way.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Georgia I like your Amelia Earhart

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  2. Hi Georgia, This is outstanding writing with wonderful verbs, and adjectives and even similes. It is such a good way to describe Amelia Earhart's adventure. Clever you!

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