hi Georgia wow your writing is outstanding. My favourite part was and flames burnt to ashes and embers. That is very descriptive and detailed. Was this peice of writing based off of a book?
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ReplyDeletewow your writing is outstanding. My favourite part was and flames burnt to ashes and embers. That is very descriptive and detailed. Was this peice of writing based off of a book?
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